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Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Haiku XXIII

Underneath the cold morning sun,
An auburn sky on a misty shroud,
A traveler lost in doubt.

11 comments:

Ridx said...

and a thunderstorm so loud,
that It made the traveler shout. :D

I know its sorta lame! That's what came in my mind. :D

Sana said...

Nice =D Cold morning sun is nice.

quartertoinsane said...

@ridx: hmmm... that may have worked in a way
@sana: what about the rest of it?

Khadeeja Z. said...

*doff hat* Excellent one. So deep and beautiful. Love it <3

quartertoinsane said...

*curtsy* thanks.

Momina said...

This has a beautiful feel to it. Love it!

quartertoinsane said...

thanks :)

Zeba said...

Sigh.

quartertoinsane said...

:) ?

Heera Nazeer said...

The feel coming through it is exquisite. Very well.

quartertoinsane said...

thanks :)